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ARCHIVE: Eucalypt
reviewed by Kirsty Karkow, Tanka Society of America
There have been few journals dedicated entirely to the English forms of contemporary tanka. Books, yes, but not many periodicals in print. And, of these, only American Tanka, Red Lights and Tangled Hair have focused on poems alone, without additional articles and essays. The first has become an annual and the last has ceased publication. Now there is another. From Australia, Beverley George has welcomed in 2007 with the bi-annual Eucalypt, A Tanka Journal. There has been much anticipation. George is well known for her spirited editing of Yellow Moon with its variety of poetic forms, articles and contests. Many contributors and readers were dismayed when she published the final edition of this popular journal with the idea of creating a new one concentrating on the form that, one assumes, has become her favorite and will be her trademark. George is a high-quality performer so it is understandable that anticipation kept building as the public learned about her new project… even more when it was a little late arriving! Am I disappointed? No. Did I expect too much? No. Am I absolutely delighted? Yes. I could stop right here but, to whet the appetites of those who have not held and admired this newborn, I will divulge a little more. Just a little, so as not to spoil the pleasure of discovery. Eucalypt is sumptuous and silky to the hand, a wonderful shade of green and stylishly understated throughout. It is a simple but graceful vehicle for displaying good poetry and never distracts the reader from its prime purpose which is to make more people aware of the delights of reading and writing tanka. The poems originate in nine different countries but the highest percentage come from Australia which makes sense, as the journal's purpose is to be Australian in concept but global in its scope. Matthew George has designed the cover. There are a few simple images and background patterns sprinkled throughout which represent the tree from which the journal takes its name. Eucalypt is supplemented by a complimentary occasional newsletter and supported by a website www.eucalypt.info Webmaster: John Bird The quality of the poetry is high. Many moods resonate. A greater variety of poetic style will come with subsequent issues, I believe, as more tanka poets find its pages and know the urge to be included, but the reader is never bored. The first page is graced by one of Janice M Bostok's tanka. She is a favorite Australian poet who has been friend and mentor to George for many years.
eucalypt leaves in stillness spin round thin then broad- eyes not yet open the pup nuzzles into my hand
This tanka refers to the Eucalyptus tree's unusual habit, which often occurs on a calm day. A group of leaves begin to spin within the tree, showing off their narrow edges and their broader surfaces by turn. The tree can also adjust its leaf edges to the summer sun to minimize moisture loss. The poet compares this habit to another mystery of nature; the way a pup, eyes still shut, trusts the human hand. What I see mostly, though, is a metaphorical blessing for the growth of this new journal, which, like the pup, has barely started its new life. Eucalyptuses are grown for shade and for their wood, for oils, resins and gums. What a variety of sustenance for the observant reader. The mood and theme moves through morning, arising and setting out for the beach or to work. Pain and healing are covered. There are poignant poems about mother.
alone now in my mother's home I sit down in her favorite chair and look down the years
Michael Thorley crafts perfect phrases that unleash a wealth of emotion and memories that most of us can relate to. No collection of tanka can avoid the poetry of mourning the past. I, too, have gnawed on the fibrous sugar cane but never considered how the dry tempers the sweet. Ellen Weston has dealt with this idea beautifully. Note the ambiguity of the first line.
childhood lovers chew raw sugarcane discard dry fibres- recalling that sweetness I stir my tea slowly
Tanka can record happy moments, even if poignant. Sanford Goldstein knows this.
snatches of last night's long dream-- flicker over my cane in that other strung-out world how I danced, how I ran!
A poem can hold a narrative within its five lines as does this one by Ron Moss. Ron is a fire-fighter in Tasmania and knows all too well the frights and satisfactions of his job.
summer night fire all along the mountain wild scars of red . . . safe, she wipes the soot from her baby's feet
"But, aren't tanka usually about love," you say? Yes. To illustrate this, here is a very modern, no-nonsense, but sensual, example by André Surridge. Good stuff!
turn out the light we can feel our way from now on no need for talk stop my mouth with kisses
And grief! Don't tanka poets write about grief? Yes. How about this heart breaker with its lovely pivoting mid-line by Alun Drysdale?
frozen stiff a white-faced heron haunting dark pools your tearless eye stunned by your stillborn child
And tanka follows eloquent tanka to the last page where, to complete the circle, the mood winds back to the wonderful shade-providing Eucalypt, written with a lighthearted approach.
shed bark reveals scribbly gum tracks on a smooth young trunk curls a tattoo of a snake and her last boyfriend's name
Carolyn Eldridge-Alfonzetti
This is a small taste of the treasures that lie between the covers of this new journal. I encourage you to indulge yourself.
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